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A lil sumtin for my gurl

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A lil sumtin for my gurl

Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 2nd, '06, 08:45

I'll never cheat on you
You know i love you and you love me two
I'm not like my whole crew
Who will play their girls with a hoe
and they just wanna drive your tahoe
I'm not like that i want us to be together and forever
Let me me tell you how i am, afterwards you might say damn!
To me you are my whole world
Because your that special girl
To me and always,
Baby once you get pregenate i'm gonna expect a son
You think i might leave you and run
I need you to listen Rebecca
I know i treated you more better then any other fella
But I wanna show you my love for you, my last words before i die
Is not gonna be hi or goodbye
It's gonna be more sweeter then a good stew
I Love you
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby C-Game » Dec 2nd, '06, 17:38

nice man
its kool for ur gal..
KIU

dont need any complex stuff for ur girl
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 2nd, '06, 17:46

nice job man.....
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '06, 17:48

Btw, u WOULD cheat on her.
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Postby Rae » Dec 2nd, '06, 17:59

aww thats sweet ...
ur girlfriend would def. love that ...

i've wrote stuff like that to my boyfriend :D
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