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Old verse i made back in the day gimme thoughts

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Old verse i made back in the day gimme thoughts

Postby Crossova16 » Dec 2nd, '06, 15:05

Sometimes people look at me like i just took a beat wrote some random rhymez and cooked some heat/ but it takes talent and time to look like me and do good like me you ni99az cant just look up to me/ sometimes even if you dunt wanna you gotta fuck with me/ and roll around with sean johnz and gun tucked beneath and ni99az cant just cut the beef/ when you rap and you gotta stay in the hood you cant fuck the streets/ but im indian nd it sumtimes sucks for me but it never sucks to be kuz i roll wid chill ni99az like abhineth/ and whats beneath is what really matters and luckily ive been gifted to be dat somebody/and when i get signed and have the spotlight shined over mah body it'll be a sign dats it time to climb to the top/ i gotta fight for the spot and sacrifice mah body and rhyme for some props/ whether you like it or not/i dont do it for the fame i do it for the gift that i thankfully got/ so when i die juss juss listen to my rhymes and try to fidn out what i tried to say all this time/ hopefully youll undeRstand man
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Postby C-Game » Dec 2nd, '06, 18:01

its oki man
but structure man structure
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Postby Rae » Dec 2nd, '06, 19:37

its iight ...

just keep practicing ...
and u'll get betta and betta

trust me ...

:D

make sure u keep postin ur stuff ... i wanna hear sum more! :D
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