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Cool Enough feat.Bigg $tealz

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Cool Enough feat.Bigg $tealz

Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 3rd, '06, 11:20

[Browngangsta210]
Do you recall a trip to NYC(remember that)
I spent all the money that I made that week(working for my cash)
38 hours on my 9 to 5
No matter how I tried your ass was never satisfied
Go back in town and I'm driving us our homes (already)
Stop; at the light and you jocking someone's clothes
I knew right then it wouldn't be me (uh huh)
Relationship was history (out the door)
I just can't bring me back for no it watching h-o-e

[Chorus]
I loved you, I couldn't live without you
My life was all about you, and that just wasn't cool enough
And now I'm back though, and rolling in my benzo
On 22 Lorenzo, and now you want to call me up

[Bigg $tealz]
High priced hoochie, love that coochie
But I won't sit back and let a broad use me
Too much cash in my jeans left pocket
In the VIP blowing kill with the Rockets
Baller shot caller, sipping alcahola
Dopehouse after-party, everybody follow
Don't trip, I got it real sick now-a-days
Six police that be earining they pay
Breaking up fights, and shining they lights
Take them all to jail till they learn to be nice
Jose, and my boy Mario
Brought a truck full of marijuana, we gone party yo

[Chorus]

[Browngangsta210]
We had met, through a friend and then (uh huh, uh huh)
Thought we'd be together to the very end (uh huh, uh huh)
My partners told me you was about that dough (uh huh, uh ha ha)
But when they said it I was like hell no
Cause I knew that you was so special (so beautiful)
Started seeing signs but I wouldn't let go (uh, uh)
You complaining about my money cash flow (what)
Said it was a what, a bit too low (too low)
You was tripping on my boy's tahoe (uh huh, uh huh)
And told me why can't you be like that balling negro

[Chorus]X2

[Browngangsta210]
Some times none of us homies are cool enough for the girl we want
That's why you either ballin' or not
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 3rd, '06, 15:59

dawg ur lyrics make u seem like the rap version of Chris Brown and I can tell ur still young how old are u exactally?
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 4th, '06, 04:37

EmptyPromises wrote:dawg ur lyrics make u seem like the rap version of Chris Brown and I can tell ur still young how old are u exactally?

I JUST TURNED 17
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby D@vid » Dec 4th, '06, 05:25

EmptyPromises wrote:dawg ur lyrics make u seem like the rap version of Chris Brown and I can tell ur still young how old are u exactally?



i agree.not really a rap, but it wasn't even that good.mediocre rhymes.
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 4th, '06, 13:22

Browngangsta210 wrote:
EmptyPromises wrote:dawg ur lyrics make u seem like the rap version of Chris Brown and I can tell ur still young how old are u exactally?

I JUST TURNED 17


it shows ur still young u'll get better in time
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 14th, '06, 12:59

chris brown???? :D
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 14th, '06, 13:01

EmptyPromises wrote:
Browngangsta210 wrote:
EmptyPromises wrote:dawg ur lyrics make u seem like the rap version of Chris Brown and I can tell ur still young how old are u exactally?

I JUST TURNED 17


it shows ur still young u'll get better in time
i am young, and i am getting better but it took me some time
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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