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Ocean Waves (small rhyme)

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Ocean Waves (small rhyme)

Postby The Next Episode » Sep 4th, '05, 13:44

I travel back and forth, throughout the twilight oceans,
The bright light that shines, fighting the sky's night, that opens,
The only escape I find is the reminence of your existence,
Resistant to the fact it's finished, leaving me diminished,
I'm coughing up enough salt to preserve my dead body with,
I hold a gun to my mouth that they deserve to rob me with,
They laugh at the fact I'm on a hearse carried by waves,
The past enemies, buried, cursing me from their graves,
I cry at this isolated place, watching my hands decay,
Betrayed by the ferocious evil, they displayed to portray,
As my tears blend in with the water, I realize there's nothing I can do,
You left in painful slaughter, now I'm leaving with you too.
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 16:29

you should be a poet man, for real, that shits good
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Postby Hailie » Sep 4th, '05, 16:33

Very good :D
::They fuck you and fuck you and fuck you, and just when you think it's over, that's when the real fucking begins!::
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Postby The Next Episode » Sep 4th, '05, 23:14

Thanks ya'll : )
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