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Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 21:03

There's a time when you feel that it gets to a stand
Where you get tired of fuckin defending your raps
You people full of fuckin disrespect, i know you wack
Maybe i should call people out and name names, defect to that
And i aint even gonna go there, if you bitch about me
Then i'll bitch about you back, and switch it, now see
I'd much rather get along with everyone i met
That's why i diss random people, it won't get some of my rep
Gone in shreds, let's see what the problem is then
When i spit another thing with a tongue that's intent
To cause insults and bite back, when people lash out at it
Deal with it, just face it, thats how i rap it
And this isn't the same as any thing you've read from me before
Get along be sweet and or set me off, just retreating far
Try looking into things before you make an assumption
I'm like a dormant volcano, trying to contain an eruption!
I'll always upload raps, even if you think it sucks so bad
If that's your opinion, there's a back button, just go back!
-Line missing-
Every time i upload and try to astound you, all hopeful
But it's my own fault for trying to fool myself
It fuels my health, i subliminally diss to insult you with stealth!
And you don't really wanna insult my raps cause i'll diss you
I'm sick of being so bitter, this is the final issue!
You hurt me man and i wonder if you enjoy it
And get joyous when you insult me, giving me less choices
Than one, only got one thing that i can do and that's delete it
You make me feel like i'm shit, my pride you have defeated
What little i had left has been beaten
Into shreds by your tongue that can slash and screech it!
I got two sides: the side that's puts up with the shit
And the side that says stuff like it, fed up with the pricks
Who just won't shut up cause they're so fucked up
That they insult me to get a high and whoa it just sucks!
I don't bite but you still find something wrong with it
And yeah i'm fucking pissed, man, this song's fitting!
I'm not some beginner fuckin rap newbie
So don't criticise and analyse me like you had knew me!
All you do is moan and moan just shut your fuckin mouth
This is the last time i'm responding, you suck, just shut it now!
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Re: Just Shut it Now

Postby Kojack » Dec 8th, '06, 21:14

Kez wrote:Don't need a goddamn mouthful from Coccoa
And you don't really wanna insult my raps cause i'll diss you
I'll always upload raps, even if you think it sucks so bad


don't push your luck kez
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Re: Just Shut it Now

Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 21:20

Kojack wrote:
Kez wrote:Don't need a goddamn mouthful from Coccoa


don't push your luck kez


Whatever you say.
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 8th, '06, 21:49

Aaaaaaah...i think imma have to quote Dr. Dre on this one.

"You so far under my radar i dont even know who the fuck u r
To tell u to suck my dick while im pissing
I dont even listen to ur shit to know who the fuck im dissing"
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Postby Rae » Dec 8th, '06, 21:53

hey kez ...
ur gettin betta! ...
keep it up!

and keep postin even tho coccoa can b a asshole! :)
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Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 22:03

Coccoa wrote:Aaaaaaah...i think imma have to quote Dr. Dre on this one.

"You so far under my radar i dont even know who the fuck u r
To tell u to suck my dick while im pissing
I dont even listen to ur shit to know who the fuck im dissing"


You know, that piece of code (A "TR Vet" badge) under your name dosen't make you better than anyone else, or give you the right to bitch at everyone you don't like.
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Postby Enimee » Dec 8th, '06, 23:03

lol @ this post










oh and FUCK COCCOA!!!HAhAHAHA
lemme quote your mom for this one
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oh wait she only screams when im around her...sorry no quote....uhh good shit kez dont let these bitches touch you...well unless you wnna reinact the michael jackson trial cause you know they'll get off by way of friend bribage
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 8th, '06, 23:32

Kez wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Aaaaaaah...i think imma have to quote Dr. Dre on this one.

"You so far under my radar i dont even know who the fuck u r
To tell u to suck my dick while im pissing
I dont even listen to ur shit to know who the fuck im dissing"


You know, that piece of code (A "TR Vet" badge) under your name dosen't make you better than anyone else, or give you the right to bitch at everyone you don't like.


Last time i checked it was you who dared to say my name. End of story.
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Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 23:38

I dared to say your name?
So? You dared to say shit about me and Enimee too, we just don't think we're too high to be treated like that like you.
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Postby Enimee » Dec 8th, '06, 23:40

hahaha he's prolly starin at the screen bleachin his hair listenin to The Real Slim Shady thinkin 'wtf is that spossed to mean...?'
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 8th, '06, 23:44

And exactly what is so special about you?? What is so great about you?? What do you know about songwriting, soundforging, studio building or whatever?? Which is the proper way to write a singing hook?? Difference between songwriting or throwing up a dozen rhymes maybe?? Or you know in which frequency to split bass and med for the crossover?? Above 450Hz is medium or still bass?? Jack-to-RCA cables, where do we use those?? Rip sound from analog (tape, LP) to digital (mp3), how we do that?? Difference between cardioid, hypercaroiod microphones?? Difference between omni, dual and uni-directional microphones??

See when u get to learn those and even more of those, then we can talk like we equal to eachother. But before you learn at least how to electroplate a loose wire, just dont bug me ok? It aint hard to say my name. Hard thing is to learn as much as i do.
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Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 23:46

Who the hell cares?
Stop acting like you're the most important person on here.
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Postby Enimee » Dec 8th, '06, 23:49

hahahahaha...wow coccoa you really showed me....hahahaha...jus cause i might not know all of the shit you just rambled on about dosnt mean i cant learn it. for 1. for 2 atleast i dont sound like im chewing on a dick every time a rap so..uh...yeah go clean your mouth...
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 8th, '06, 23:50

Kez wrote:Who the hell cares?
Stop acting like you're the most important person on here.


Who cares?? Imma tell u one thing only....your pathetic attempt of song, i could make it sounds proffessional in a new york minute.
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Postby Kez » Dec 8th, '06, 23:58

You still didn't answer about who cares :whistle:
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