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Been Away For A While [incomplete]

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Been Away For A While [incomplete]

Postby Inches » Dec 9th, '06, 02:59

got bored

[Chor]
oh that inches been away for a while,
but his rhymes still makin all haters smile,
makes enemies squares, lay em out like tiles
while i was gone, wankstas stealin my style,

oh that inches been away for a while,
but his rhymes still makin all haters smile,
makes enemies squares, lay em out like tiles
while i was gon, wankstas stealin my style,
(yeah)

[V1]
hey haters, look here! guess whos back again?
why its your best friend, known as Mr 2010
some call me inches, but my AKA is matt roan,
crazy flowin, ladies down beggin to start blowin!
afraid that he might get up and start goin',
afraid one of the flicks he took might start showin
but he keeps it underground, likes to sell his secrets,
not afraid to to open your mouth and to zip and leak it
yeah i pretty much just said ill piss in ya mouth,
i know you like the flavor so baby go down south
and the cameras rollin, so gargle and swallow,
i wanna stick down low, in your tunnel thats hollow,
hmm this rhyme just turned into a mini porn,
i forgot to use a rubber, in 9months my son is born!
oh great now i gotta write raps and make money!
put rings on my hand to smack fakes who flow funny?
well back to business, pay attention, listen and look,
what you mean this verse is over and we need another hook?

[Chor]
oh that inches been away for a while,
but his rhymes still makin all haters smile,
makes enemies squares, lay em out like tiles
while i was gone, wankstas stealin my style,

oh that inches been away for a while,
but his rhymes still makin all haters smile,
makes enemies squares, lay em out like tiles
while i was gon, wankstas stealin my style,
(yeah)

[V2]
well now its time to talk about my problem,
im tryin to make it big but i aint from LA or harlem,
so whos gonna listen to this kid with mad flow?
if i dont leak my audio,wheres my career gonna go?
and im full of questions i have no clue what to ask,
teenage hormones are raging, how do i stay on task?
afriad while reciting my lines ill pop a boner
im self concious too, afraid ima be a loner,
lucky for me my balls is 3 fuckin pounds each,
through my jeans see a lump the size of a peach,
dont look bitch! dont even go near!
look in my eyes the fuckin shows up here!
how come i cant stay on topic, like A - D - D
disorderly, hot as hell and you still make more than me
shit.

[Chorx2]


[V3]
im a huge fan of my lyrics and my music, im almost fanatical,
the man on the corner sold me some mushrooms, told me they were magical
i found my sisters dress, my mother said i looked like a fem,
now i see little gnomes on the floor, asking if i wanna fly with them,
i reply yes and we start on our journey,
feel like this, ill finish first in the tourney!


uhh im really bored and wrote this in about 5 minutes...
keep the hate to a minimum


:)
Last edited by Inches on Dec 16th, '06, 23:13, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 9th, '06, 03:26

dude you BETTER make an audio for this i LOVE the flow you got going on here lol

good job for something that only took 5 minutes lol :worship:
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Postby Inches » Dec 9th, '06, 03:39

steverocks88 wrote:dude you BETTER make an audio for this i LOVE the flow you got going on here lol

good job for something that only took 5 minutes lol :worship:


i was bored. lol
but im too lazy to continue
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Postby Inches » Dec 9th, '06, 03:48

any other feeders?
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Postby Restlesswon » Dec 9th, '06, 10:36

nice shit man,lookin forward to the audio if u makin one
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Postby C-Game » Dec 9th, '06, 17:20

nice stuff inchey
glad ur back with some ill shit
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Postby Inches » Dec 11th, '06, 02:20

thanks restless and C

any more?
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Postby Inches » Dec 16th, '06, 23:13

added another verse and a half
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 16th, '06, 23:49

you got the hang of writing a song man keep it up once you egt recording down everythings goni blow up lol
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Postby Inches » Dec 18th, '06, 04:48

100 views and this is all the feeed i get?

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Postby NoLimitWordz » Dec 18th, '06, 05:24

good shit man...liked the flow...first verse had me rollin..so yeah just keep up the good shit and like said before i look forward to it if ya make it inot an audio
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Postby Inches » Dec 27th, '06, 23:18

NoLimitWordz wrote:good shit man...liked the flow...first verse had me rollin..so yeah just keep up the good shit and like said before i look forward to it if ya make it inot an audio


somethin wrong with the second?
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 28th, '06, 02:52

sick i like it thats really good 4 like 5 min i like V1 the best :worship:
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