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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 20:53

(wrote it to the way i am beat)


Intro:
I gotta get some shit off my chest
This bitch ass motherfucker ditched me
Ya know how it goes but yeah
These are words are aiming at him

Verse 1:
It
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Postby Big-T » Dec 11th, '06, 20:58

Very powerful and emotional lyrix bro i feel ya :'( u must have pretty pissed

Some good rhymez in there v. deep. Sounds a bit Eminemish 2

Keep it up :)
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 21:02

lol yeah i was pissed big time lol

thanks for checking it out man :D
oh and yeah i sort of bit the style eminem used lol

but thanks for checking it out agian lol
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Postby D@vid » Dec 11th, '06, 21:04

Big-T wrote:Very powerful and emotional lyrix bro i feel ya :'( u must have pretty pissed

Some good rhymez in there v. deep. Sounds a bit Eminemish 2

Keep it up :)



i kinda agree, it kinda reminded me of em. good job though.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 21:05

lol yeah thanks for checking it out though :D:D
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Postby Rae » Dec 12th, '06, 00:04

*mouth drops* lol

STEVE that was grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat (like frosted flakes ... there more than good there grrrrrrrreat) :)

i def. like that 1!!! keep it up hunn ;)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 12th, '06, 00:06

Rae wrote:*mouth drops* lol

STEVE that was grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat (like frosted flakes ... there more than good there grrrrrrrreat) :)

i def. like that 1!!! keep it up hunn ;)


there goni taste great.....there goni taste great...when frosty flakes are put in my plate..there goni taste GREATT!!!!

:laughing:

rae you rip me of all my thugish antics in one post :'( :laughing:

good stuff truth :D or steve :D or whateva your goni call yourself :D
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Postby Rae » Dec 12th, '06, 00:15

Bar wrote:
Rae wrote:*mouth drops* lol

STEVE that was grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat (like frosted flakes ... there more than good there grrrrrrrreat) :)

i def. like that 1!!! keep it up hunn ;)


there goni taste great.....there goni taste great...when frosty flakes are put in my plate..there goni taste GREATT!!!!

:laughing:

rae you rip me of all my thugish antics in one post :'( :laughing:

good stuff truth :D or steve :D or whateva your goni call yourself :D



lmao ... :D i try 2 be funny ... :) but i act like that all tha time ...

cant help it :)
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 12th, '06, 02:29

lmao thanks a lot guys although bad thing is audio will never be released
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Postby Rae » Dec 12th, '06, 21:23

steverocks88 wrote:lmao thanks a lot guys although bad thing is audio will never be released


y? :(
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Postby C-Game » Dec 12th, '06, 21:31

Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:lmao thanks a lot guys although bad thing is audio will never be released


y? :(


yea man y :(
i liked it man better than ur earlier one

btw ur collab with ashley ( not rae ) on mockin bird beat was awesome man
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Postby Rae » Dec 12th, '06, 21:43

cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:lmao thanks a lot guys although bad thing is audio will never be released


y? :(


yea man y :(
i liked it man better than ur earlier one

btw ur collab with ashley ( not rae ) on mockin bird beat was awesome man
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yeah it was awesome ... but tha girl's part sucked ... no offense :)

i woulda did it alot betta lmao :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 13th, '06, 02:28

it's hard to explain for personal reason's i want to keep it locked up but ummm idk if enough people want to hear it i guess i could record it lol

idk lol

i'll do it for my fans lmao jk

oh and c game thanks for checking out the song with ash in it glad you liked it lol
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