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My Childhood

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My Childhood

Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 12th, '06, 06:06

I was the most hated boy in my family and i'm her son
Was it because i look like my dad or is it because i'm not the lucky one

Getting whiped by 3 strings of Carboards and 2 extention cords
All i ever wanted was to save up for a toy pourche

Bleeding from my back just for trying to take a bath
This isn't a real life its crap and i don't understand that

I cleaned my room just to be nice next thing you know i get bettin up by ice
Drenched in my own blood it felt more painfull than a bloodsuckin lice

Tied to my own chair so i can't go out with my friends and go play
My arms weak and attached to the chair like hard clay

for christmas my only present i had were 5 to 9 punches to my gut
Even my present for my biirthday my lung were nearly closed shut

Took my baseball bat and busted my head open from top to bottom
I tryied calling dad but u busted my lip mom all i want is my god to give me back my dad plz call e'm

This isn't how anybodys llife can start but it could, and they should
know this is my harsh childhood.
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby rap_gurl » Dec 12th, '06, 23:22

subject is deep.
"I do say things that I think will shock people. But I don't do things to shock people. I'm not trying to be the next Tupac, but I don't know how long I'm going to be on this planet. So while I'm here, I might as well make the most of it."
-- Eminem
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 13th, '06, 13:57

Yuhh but i'm just telling the truth about me
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby C-Game » Dec 13th, '06, 17:40

deep shit and da way uve elabaroted it was nice
hope all of its not true..

nice stuff man
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 14th, '06, 12:47

cgame wrote:deep shit and da way uve elabaroted it was nice
hope all of its not true..

nice stuff man
THNX , AND EVERYTHING I PUT ITS ALL TRUE, MY CHILDHOOD WUS ACTUALLY LIKE DAT :(
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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