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Postby Kez » Dec 13th, '06, 20:25

I interupt your fuckin thoughts to bring you rap
A loud beat i sing through that you'll miss if ya blink too fast!
I give you crap cause i got nothin better to do
There's still a several few who hate it forever, do you?!
You think just because i got ripped a new ass
In my latest battle ima stop? Come on, we better get you to class!
A member of a crew kickin ass, aint even released a new frickin track
And we're still fuckin people that you wouldn't class
As wack, let's have fun have a new rap spun
Have people dickride your crap smut, and get it lapped up!
Back to the lab and make crap that you class as
Wack as a rat's ass, like your ears are trapped in an ass that is fat!
Man i don't know, maybe i should stop
MCMaybe would not object to that, oops! Sometimes i don't mean to say things! (FUCK OFF!)
Pissed off yob ready to release anger at will
To lyrically kill motherfuckers like cancer does kill
Except i'm sadder, more ill, gets fuckin bladdered on pills
I am the master, but still underrated as i could feel!
I'll be standing here rapping till my hair dissapears
I don't care if you're queer, i'll call you fag till you stare, brink of tears!
So till i stop raping keep the sheeps' cocks shaven
That wasn't a typo, go and change your locks! (K then!)
A bubbling surface from my life's issues that i'm juggling perfect
Just all came out at once, i'm not fucking mumbling! HEARD IT?!
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 13th, '06, 20:36

:laughing: i like it....u did say ass a lot but its still good :thumbsup:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 13th, '06, 20:40

nice shit :D is it wrote to a beat the structure goes a bit

but multis and flow everything is great again :8)
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Postby C-Game » Dec 13th, '06, 21:08

yea some nice shit and some nice punches
good for a battle type of thing
ha ha if block was here he wld hv used those lines :)
( if he had wrote it btw )
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Postby Rae » Dec 13th, '06, 21:39

hmmmm ... i think it was good!
it had great flow, and nice punches like cgame said ...

u did use tha words ass and class alot ...
but ...

it was still tiight :D

keep it up! :D
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