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A Rose in the Rain

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A Rose in the Rain

Postby shady_babii3 » Dec 14th, '06, 01:08

Lifless and cold here I lay on my bed

as cold thoughts of sorrow run in my head.

You make me feel torment. You make me feel pain.

It feels like youve left me a rose in the rain.

The letter you left me was too much to bear.

The black rose beside it made me feel despair.

I sit alone as Im going insane.

Why did you leave me a rose in the rain?

Im souless and empty. Theres nothing to feel.

Im dying inside and the wounds never heal.

Im trapped in a dark world, a sad world of pain

alone cause youve left me a rose in the rain.
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 14th, '06, 01:13

Its good, i like it. Sounds like a poem or sumthin.
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