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A Lil Suttin 4 Da Noobs

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A Lil Suttin 4 Da Noobs

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 15th, '06, 20:36

I could say my Crimes r Through like Rymes I Knew/
it's Time 2 See tha Story Be tha Glory make music like Chimes Do//

I have 5, 4 any1 I Strive More so Men Run I Deprive Ignore Then Become Ruthless/
I'm on the rise call me Day Breaker wit Haymakers my 2 Fists r a Nuisance//

I Opt to Tell that I'm Shocked to Dwell in a world where tha Clock is Hell/
it Ticks Today be Quick to Say b4 ya Whisked Away and Locked in a Cell//

I Get Internet Threats but I'm a shark like Bets Set Debt I Deposit Drops/
call me Slot Machines I Got Tha Dream Me I could Pause It and it wouldn't Stop//

I'm a Profiled Voice like a Wild Choice I Choose to Wage War/
I hear My Old Noise like 1 Word ya Done Heard u Lose ders tha Stage Door//

call me out on ya First Line I Reimburse Mine u Fess and Love Whats Said/
an Exit Read your Text Is Dead Left Instead wit tha Breath Of A Fed//
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 15th, '06, 21:38

that's some dope shit nice multi's in there
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