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Penitentiary verse i did when i was locked up

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Penitentiary verse i did when i was locked up

Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 16th, '06, 09:52

still working and changing a few things


Mi esposa won't listen keeps comin up missin'
Feliz navidad aqui in Kansas state Prison
no visits no kisses often state bitches
no mas on t.v., magizines & need wishes
i work on the whole what nigga sinton
life with 4-5 got me this job make bread with my pus ese tonto
con esos locos
everything tension fights for the tubo
house regulation dropin cantones
bosses talk shit because i drove on my sobres
raised by corn bread, desert over juice, green beans sogie and loose
thats bull shit that ain't no food
as in fool in jja school
these fuckin vatos don't feel me bitch you live in the free
as i ball trough this Penitentiary
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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Postby C-Game » Dec 16th, '06, 18:11

good stuff man
moderate rhymes
and work on strucutur
but i cant understand certain stuff

wat got u locked up
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 17th, '06, 13:23

cgame wrote:good stuff man
moderate rhymes
and work on strucutur
but i cant understand certain stuff

wat got u locked up
OH BECAUSE SUM STUFF ARE SPANISH WORDS :sweating: , AND I WENT BECAUSE A PO-PO TREW A COCE DIME BAG INFRONT OF ME AND WHEN THE OTHER PO-PO'S CAME THEY FOUND IT AND THEY TOUGHT IT WAS MINE :(
They say it's never too late, to have an early childhood
If I could, turn back the hands of time, God should
Forgive what i did as a kid to run blocks
Now my dreams are just dream cops and gun shots -Proof (R.I.P.):king:Image
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