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Dark Angel

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Dark Angel

Postby shady_babii3 » Dec 17th, '06, 07:33

Cast out from heaven to suffer condemption,

the angel of darkness seeks out his redemption.

The sins of the past mix his love with his hate.

He cries out to god spreading black wings of fate.

His halo still shines as bright as his love

but his wings were turned black when he fell from above.

He wants nothing more than to be good again,

but he cant seem to harness the light from within.

Temptation surrounds him. He hasnt escaped

the darkness within. His soul has been raped.

He feels left alone, a forsaken wraith.

He feels so abandoned and yet he keeps faith.

He hopes to shine bright as he did once before,

to not be led into temptation anymore,

to be driven by faith, and by hope, and by just,

and not by temptation, deciet, and power lust.
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Postby C-Game » Dec 17th, '06, 08:00

nice stuff
deep
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Postby xsibleyx03 » Dec 17th, '06, 09:18

deepness
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 17th, '06, 14:12

I love it wow that was really deep. I love poems like this they really reach out to the human soul and this poem describe's exactally how I feel sometime's about God. This is a pretty good poem u've got here :worship: propz for sharing that.
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