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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 19th, '06, 01:35

wrote all these just there coz im bored imma keep writing and practicing might post more


was listenign to a song and felt like writing this not going for complxity or anything just wanted to write it

on your own just tryna make a tone people moan about a dream
a mean its only a target that you aim to hit always looking up to it
a aim higher than i beileive to reach so when i fall there nothing to breach,
dont ever give up till its totally impossible , then dont pop a pill,
coz ppl give in after that and become ill , giving up forever ,
a read a book now i bet that took you by suprise,
a girl at the age of 3 had nothing to rise to,
a step mother and father that only abuse her,
a swear dis hit me hard, like steel card,


relized i hate writing without tryna up my game so did this


a got a killer and im iller than a can of miller,
like mj im the thriller dancing on top of a piller,
but still a , spit like my salivas acid,
beef imma let it slide like placid,
ill just put you in a casket and cast it in the waste basket,
a got it locked like gasket and i lost the key,
you exhaust by me, i aint hot im like jack frost see,
i dont melt you, i freeze you, then smash you into shards,
then a dealt you disease in a flash like dealing cards,
so here i am feeling like healing the game ,
instead im reeling and stealing you name,
you apealling coz you thick like a cealing,
you aint conceiling nothing a got a sinking feeling you bluffing,

tried to cram alota rythms into a small space lol

see its good you should well could infact would,
run to the hood like raw wood yeh i understood,
see i dont want the fame or the beef or the game,
just learn my name know i spit flame,
here i proclaim my aim the top fame,
its a shame coz i aint gonni stay tame,


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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 19th, '06, 14:42

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