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Postby MoBrat » Dec 27th, '06, 01:31

it seems like TR's full of bitches, snitches n pricks i feel like im tryin to run through a wall of bricks every time i get up it's like someone else gets in some kicks tired of takin licks now everyone of u dicks are gonna see some new tricks go ahead call me n my boys hicks this is how we mix at least we dont fix any battle kill u like a rattle snake u've made ur last mistake for fuck sake im not fake ima shake the ground like a quake i dont care if u partake in my assassination cause i've hit frustration i know i dont meet ur audio expectation but ur the one they'll be replacin mother fucker look at who ur facin now ur spacin on coke i dont care if ur from stoke like kez or from maryland like enimee cause u wont be able to stop me come on try'n pop three my way lets go pull the tech n spay i'll deck n slay jus remember what u say isn't okay u goin at rap like its a buffet so today i randomly attack now everyone wants a cd like illmatic so ur a ill mac napoleon dynamite called he wants his grillz back everyone knows ur still wack u'll be takin down like when white tryed to kill black i know im not as good as shack or sound as good as eminem on a track but at least i have a come back ur just a hack ur head i'll sever but i'll never be a ghost writer go ahead boast biter im the last fighter standing comin in for a crash landing i hope yall are understanding this is not a hate freestyle its just something that has a bit of mestyle cause it sounds better then when i keystyle something to get out emotion n i dont care if it starts commotion


im not hatin on anyone i just started writing cause i was bored
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Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 06:34

sick shit for real
thas real talk homboi let um know
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Postby Rae » Dec 28th, '06, 06:55

i like it ... it sounds kinda deep but ina i fuckin hate u way ... niiiiiiiiice!

keep it up ;)
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 28th, '06, 07:34

Rae wrote:i like it ... it sounds kinda deep but ina i fuckin hate u way ... niiiiiiiiice!

keep it up ;)

lol i meant it 2 be a kinda fuck u i hate u but a kinda ya ur still kool its weird i wrote it well mad and happy so its kinda f-ed up :sweating: and thanks 4 the comments
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 28th, '06, 20:29

nice shit man
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 30th, '06, 08:33

i just re-read this and it kinda starts like rabbit run i didn't even see that till now :sweating:
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