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The Return Of Friday

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The Return Of Friday

Postby Inzanity » Dec 28th, '06, 19:34

u dissappeared like a gost in the dark
wen u left I lost all hope in my heart
but now u've walked back into my life
and it's almost like u never had left
no more tossing or turning at night
u know I would never had guessed
dat when my dream's were fading away
u'd be the one who brought them back
and just when I had forggoten how
u came and taught me to laugh
I hope I don't end up reliving the past
u say that u've changed, u won't cheat
I'll take ur word for it, ur forgiven of that
but I gave u more then enough chance's
and I mean it when I say ur giving ur last
cuz if u screw up this time I promise u that
u won't get another one so don't even ask
so for the last time I'm gonna give u
my heart my love and my soul
so let's forget the past I forgive u
even though it's hard my love and u know
that I don't think it's worth it
but I'll still love u like I first did
so welcome back friday, I'm ur forgotten love
and now it's time that I say, I hate u so much
I couldn't possibly put it into words
but at the same time I love u so much it hurt's
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Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 20:18

good
job
duuuude
keep at it
you got potential...
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Postby jenocide187 » Dec 28th, '06, 20:49

that was awesome! excellent =D>
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 29th, '06, 14:18

thanks for the reply's :D any1 else??
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Postby ShadyAngel » Dec 29th, '06, 14:50

that is really good hunny, post more your real real good.

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