new shit (added more and changed some stuff around)

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 03:27

The sky is the limit in no matter what you do
No lie hell what would you do in my shoes
Would you sit back let time fly and get lazy
Could you finish a track before you go crazy
See I spit every verse as if it were my last
I might quit this shit and leave it all in the past
No time to stop I gotta haul my ass so fast
Show class and in some cases mult-I task
I try to write spit mix and produce my shit
I live for the fight but I never throw the first hit
I deal with posers all day trying to get me pissed
I kill their lyrics and tear em up for the kicks
Cause they can

by **Enimee** » Dec 29th, '06, 03:38

wow that shit hard for reall no lie on that

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 03:43

thanks a lot dude

by 4D » Dec 29th, '06, 03:52

Very cool man, nice flow, great concept. Has a kind of energy to it, like "Lose Yourself" or something. Would've liked to see more multies, but, maybe that's just me. Either way, thought it was tight, would make a good track I think. :8)

by **Ka0t1c** » Dec 29th, '06, 03:52

good try but i'd like to see something more in depth, its too basic n easy to me

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 03:57

@sarah
thanks and yeah i remember too lol

@fordie
thanks for the feed man and yeah i feel the same way it does feel a little like lose yourself

@kaotic
i'll try to work on that dude
thanks for checking it out

by 4D » Dec 29th, '06, 04:00

steverocks88 wrote:
@fordie
thanks for the feed man and yeah i feel the same way it does feel a little like lose yourself

Yeah, sounds like you had that beat playing when you were writing it. Cool to see you can take the negative feedback too, that's the art of improvement. Work on the multies and complexity. I look forward to your next!

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 04:02

FORDIE wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
@fordie
thanks for the feed man and yeah i feel the same way it does feel a little like lose yourself

Yeah, sounds like you had that beat playing when you were writing it. Cool to see you can take the negative feedback too, that's the art of improvement. Work on the multies and complexity. I look forward to your next!

yeah there's always room for improvment no matter what lol

thanks and i too look forward to my next lmao

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 06:16

added some more shit to it so i figured i'd bump it (if it's ok with the mods lmao

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by **Enimee** » Dec 29th, '06, 06:17

i dont hate you for it nice revamp

by **ShadyAngel** » Dec 29th, '06, 15:29

thats well good hun

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 29th, '06, 20:55

lol thanks

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 30th, '06, 19:09

thanks a lot dude that means alot

new shit (added more and changed some stuff around)

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