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Just Some Shit

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Just Some Shit

Postby Kez » Dec 29th, '06, 03:50

This is just some shit i wrote in about 20 minutes.

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Walk in, record, and be leavin' the booth
Splatter my brain over the ground, i had a key to the roof
Fly to seven countries in a fighter jet
Cover the city in bombs, like walls covered in spider webs
I confess my mind's fucked up and i suck but
The labels won't care if they high on blunts!
And i've never taken drugs but i say i do
And the reason you hear it is cause i play in mic booths
One thing leads to another
Here's your brother, and sorry, he swallowed the keys to your hummer
I'm not too original but i got you in visual
Raps getting kicked in the crotch you a criminal
I got idiots being retards got bastards being
Burnt alive, bodies smothered in hot vaseline
What i have said it what hasn't been
Said before, i'm not insane i just have a dream
Singing the words to this song by friggin Fred Durst
Ha! The day i do that i'll do a song wit the biggest dick, Birks!
I'm losing the flow while i'm doin a show
And a random dick shouts You're a nuisance you know!
Hip Hop is dead? No but this yob is red
In the face from running from me when i'm pissed off, intent
To bust his knees and make his stomach bleed
Let the hospital stitch him up, then have it just repeat
I'm like a dog, i launch and begin chewin the flesh
Then piss on his leg, then using it to do him, unless
It's some motherfucker who's a dick
Or anybody like Birks, fucking nuisances
Already said that! I'm hot enough, enough hot shit to cause climate change
But cool enough to kill us all with icy rains
Violent pain, that's right you gays i'm deranged
Now i'll go on a rampage, until only my rhyme remains!

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Just random shit.
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 29th, '06, 04:22

:D i like it the flow is off in a few places but overall i enjoyed it keep up the good work
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Postby Rae » Dec 29th, '06, 05:12

yeah i agree ... it was good but off in sum places ... but ur gettin betta ...

so keep it up :D
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