Random Thoughts(i dont know what 2 call it)

[MoBrat]

i feel lost willing to do anything to get her back at any cost alone without her life turns to a blur how could i let this occur with her i prefer but in this spur i realize she's the only 1 that can make me smile this attempt is worthwhile but it feels like i still got a mile to go before im able to show how much i love u yo cause ur not like every other ho without ur hello my mind would propably blow outta my skull life would become so dull my fears have become null every time i see those tears i wish i could stay with u for years untill everything clears after new years ima be a different man when u were in trouble i ran to ur side i tried but i was afraid of being denied so i stand here n throw away my pride its something i had to decide im not here to try'n divide cause u know i've never lied to u every day i kept true i couldn't see what i wanted was in my view most guys wanna screw but thats not what im here to do guess im almost threw expressing how i feel i just hope she'll see that she has the key hopein we could be together forever thats y i try'n write something clever

i got tired of writing so i stopped but enjoy

[Enimee]

das what im talkin bout baby hell yeah that shit was hela hot 4 real

[ShadyAngel]

that was real deep hun, keep going at it its great try making it a bit longer, because if it is rap then it doesnt take long for it to be over and something that good should last longer :P

[MoBrat]

thanks 4 the comments...ya i was going 2 keep writing but i stopped cause i got tired of writing and i had like 6 msn convo's but i will add more eventually

[ShadyAngel]

good good :P

i no what u mean lol

[Ka0t1c]

nice, I like it, (talkin slurrish now) eye lyk itt uh lottt!