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Will You Be My Girl

Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 06:12

Chorus.
Will....you....beee....my....giiiirl
beeee....myy....girl....
will you be my girl
x2

verse1
hey babe gotta question for ya think you can gimme an answer
its pretty straight forward and i cant say it faster
i want you need you whateva it is i jus know i breathe you
your like weed to you got me high off you im see through
ta you cause your eyes peirce ma soul cant explain this yo
it seems like im this guys fiercful foe cause he cant git this girl
and i gotter like in the palm of my hand and i cant stand
jus 3 hours wit out you bi my side and can i demand
your love cause i need you like the lord above its what
i live for your what i live on and im sort---a in da most
precarious postion so jus listen your the best thing on my wish list and
im still missin some vital key or component to make me whole and fittin
and your it that little thing that completes my puzzle
the coolest chick most perfect wont get you in trouble

chorus

verse2
so yeah you get what im tryin to say i need your love im dyin away
every second i cant say your ma girlfriend i need to have you or ill decay
and rot away like every second i stay here alone waitin if you'll ring ma fone
cause i hate callin and gettin no answer its like your rudolf and im
prancer i need you to guide my sleigh to night you no your a dime
and its a crime for us to stay apart any longer so be my girl i couldnt feel
any stronger this is real my heart is what you steal and i think i could deal
wit growin old wit you like adam sandler said in the wedding singer ya know its true
that yur the best thin to ever happen to me dont know what i would do
if you jus up and disappeared or didnt even walk into my life at all
i prolly jus wish and tear my way to lonliness and stalk the greatest of all
end up like stan ova a bridge but your here and listinen
to me and all i gotta say thats so comfortin in every way im wishin
you would jus say yes finalize this deal and be my girl
i said it once you know its true i can give you the world


chorus x4
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Postby Rae » Dec 29th, '06, 06:20

dammmmmmmmn that was great hunn! i loved it ;)

YES !!!

ima so lucky ;)
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 06:20

nah im the lucky one, thats exactly what i was lookin for :)
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 29th, '06, 06:39

props its got great flow and it sounds good and i like the lyrics damn keep up the good sh!t :worship:
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Postby Hoopz » Dec 29th, '06, 08:42

damn
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 18:18

...whateva you say MC Maybe....come see me den if you got some type of prob and for real get off ghosts dick dats dat gay shit
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 29th, '06, 18:22

Enimee wrote:...whateva you say MC Maybe....come see me den if you got some type of prob and for real get off ghosts dick dats dat gay shit


hahahahahahahahahahaha

omg dam sure i got freinds form the ent wer all have but asking soemone out :laughing:

enimee you are oficially a weirdo :8)
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 18:25

yeah so they tell me....ill get ova it tho and hey bar don be mad cause you cant get no chix period :P
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 29th, '06, 18:27

Enimee wrote:yeah so they tell me....ill get ova it tho and hey bar don be mad cause you cant get no chix period :P


ouch...ok well i dont wanna get involved but y yall startin sh!t on the internet nothing good ever comes of it :whistle:
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Postby Rae » Dec 29th, '06, 18:33

MoBrat wrote:
Enimee wrote:yeah so they tell me....ill get ova it tho and hey bar don be mad cause you cant get no chix period :P


ouch...ok well i dont wanna get involved but y yall startin sh!t on the internet nothing good ever comes of it :whistle:



i agree ...

Enimee is gonna think he is right and nobodys gonna change that. Bar, Ghost, and McMaybe are gonna think their right and nobodys gonna change that. so its a lose-lose situation ... so yeahhh
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 29th, '06, 18:39

Enimee wrote:yeah so they tell me....ill get ova it tho and hey bar don be mad cause you cant get no chix period :P


yeh i cant get no chix :laughing: and i know you can gwt them easy you just need to install software right ?
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Postby Hoopz » Dec 29th, '06, 18:42

I said damn....

How'd my name get throwin into this by saying damn???

Wow....
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 19:05

ok hahahaha @ bar your hilarious dude even tho your dissin me that was funnnnny

and hoopz das your boy he talkin shit cause you brought him into this so yeah whateva he says is jus like you sayin it cause it was nuthin between me n him till you started poppin off at the mouth
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 20:53

well no one asked your faggot opinion did they? you fuckin bitch dont warn me bout shit cause you aint bout nothin get the fuck adahere and dont be stupid you know you can handle this shit dawg and thats not even me bein cocky im jus sayin dont start somtin you cant finish
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Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '06, 21:03

ok mac maybe you faggot try some shit if you really think you got a chance in hell
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