I Gave it Up Because Why?

[Ka0t1c]

I was into makin music everyday
n even many of my friends would say my lyrics were ok
but then I began to take a different way
but yet I let the hip hop stay cuz in my brain it would play
and yes I really think I got to say I never meant all this pain
but I am givin out my thanx to the men and women on this page cuz their interest remains
my drinkin's been strange but I remember enterin this picture like I was in the middle spittin center stage while my enemies of every age were getting their little fingers bitten for stickin em in my cage as I went thru an adrenaline rage
and if ya didnt exit this text I create:
Eminem's within my veins, Triple Six is where I came
N Twista plus 2Pac n Game are my mentors, they helped like the infamous Doctor Dre
Big, not Small so my Bizzy Bones are not to break
these balls are great, the alcohol just aint
as an underdog off the chain I'm gonna reign
my alias: Kaotic I claim but I got a government name
In God I trust, that will always remain pumpin my blood n oxygen to my brain
I'm locked on my aim, puttin bodies to shame
I shouldn't be under the same genre cuz my talk is not plain
I walk this terrain lookin for profits n train to follow the gains
before they are swallowed by hate n hollow their faith
I'm not a saint but I wander til faint beyond what's discovered hollerin hey
its not just for the dollars but fame n keep up with the flame
before I've fallen: rotted: decayed

[ShadyAngel]

i really like that, specially because some of the words dont rym but they fit into it if u no what i mean.

the vibe was good keep it up

[Inzanity]

nice shit man I really feel the vibe of it. and the concept of it is pretty kool I like ur choice of word's as well and the flow of it was alright structure was off a bit but for the most part I like it.

[Enimee]

you really gotta read it to catch all the shit i got out of that

it was real dope like your wordplay and complexity were super high on this

i loved the vocab

and the flow was perfect it was like really good so yeah keep the shit up playa