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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 30th, '06, 07:49

The truth teaming with inches in this run
This song has meaning and we
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Postby Rae » Dec 30th, '06, 07:59

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

that was wayy to long tho .... it took me like 10 min. to read all that!

u should b more considerate of ur readers! :tounge2:

good job btw
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Postby ShadyAngel » Dec 30th, '06, 14:25

lol.

i think it was great hun
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 30th, '06, 17:28

thanks to the both of you :D :flower:

and rae :tounge2: lol
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 30th, '06, 17:31

its good u only use end rhymes tho but overall i like it :happy:
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 30th, '06, 17:39

MoBrat wrote:its good u only use end rhymes tho but overall i like it :happy:


nah there were some rhymes in the middle in some lines lol

thanks for reading it though
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 30th, '06, 17:40

LOL ya sorry didn't see them till now good job :thumbsup:

EDIT:thanks 4 helping blind ppl like me see them with bolding it :laughing:
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 30th, '06, 17:43

MoBrat wrote:LOL ya sorry didn't see them till now good job :thumbsup:


lmao it's cool :p
thanks :D
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Postby Semper Fidelis » Dec 31st, '06, 12:41

It reads easy so that is good!
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Postby C-Game » Dec 31st, '06, 12:48

kool steve
whr r them multies man
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 31st, '06, 18:53

thanks clarky :happy:

lmao c game i ain't on that level yet lol
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