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sick shit flow on its awesome only lines i disliked were

broke the teachers every rule, broke in closets, searched for tools,
stole a brick case, shovels, brooms, smahsed the starin kids like doom,

different rythming but eminem sayed something very similiar , not saying your biting or anythign i know you aint coz its completely different rythming just when i read it it mayed me think of the eminem song...witch i forget the name of

the rest of its was great

[Enimee]

actually that didnt make me think of brain damage at all i mean vaguely if anythin but overall it was a nice write


o and now i know who da real dickryder is my b mc

[Enimee]

actually i realllly liked this i mean jus the concept its somethin i been wantin to do for a while and you pulled it off perfectly good shit 4 real i wnna audio

[Enimee]

no no no maybe i was callin bar the dickryder your str8

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no no no maybe i was callin bar the dickryder your str8

how the fuck am i a dickrider

[Enimee]

pretty sure you've replied to mos every 1 of mc maybe's posts...i dunno maybe im full of shit i tend to call people dickryders randomly and alll willy nilly

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pretty sure you've replied to mos every 1 of mc maybe's posts...i dunno maybe im full of shit i tend to call people dickryders randomly and alll willy nilly

enimee seriously fuck up do you relize how stupid you sound, before you made sense when you hated on me now you just plain stupid, n i aint goni ruin this topic so just shut up with your stupid annoying posts coz no one cares

[D@vid]

good job

boy became deranged and sick, learned to suck his own damn dick,he masturbated little kids

^^ thats the greatest part right there