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I got this Dumb Fuck, Strung and Stuck, Hung Up like tha Iraqi [Sad Dam]//
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Nice Current Events Punchline
by Rain Matrix » Jan 5th, '07, 17:20
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by 4D » Jan 5th, '07, 17:54
Yeah, nice man, works better as a multi-syllable rhyme if you remove the "it's" before Saddam, but, it's very good, you should make a verse out of it! 
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by C-Game » Jan 5th, '07, 17:58
FORDIE wrote:Yeah, nice man, works better as a multi-syllable rhyme if you remove the "it's" before Saddam, but, it's very good, you should make a verse out of it!
yeah agree
"its" is an extra syllable
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