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Raintime All Tha Time - Feed Plz

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Raintime All Tha Time - Feed Plz

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 9th, '07, 02:56

my Perspective tha Best Kid an Elective Investment
so I Protect It with something u don't wanna Mess With
I'm Scripted Admit It I Get This with Quickness I'm Rain Matrix
u can get Slain Quick and I will Remain If
what Goes Around Comes Around I know this Clown who Runs his Mouth
neva a Drought u can get Doused Out u know what I'm About
when I'm in tha House so whats up Now get Pounded Down till u Drown
I make tha Lame Expire and tha Tame Retire
yur Brains A Liar like a paradox Rains Tha Fire
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 9th, '07, 03:29

ooohhhh

nice lyrics
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Postby Rae » Jan 9th, '07, 03:30

wow thats great!

i liked it ... i would give n e thing to write like that ;)

good job :D
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 9th, '07, 06:14

Thanx this might b 1 of my best keystyles 2 date

Uppin 4 mo feed
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 9th, '07, 08:00

Rain Matrix wrote:Thanx this might b 1 of my best keystyles 2 date

Uppin 4 mo feed


well mobrat will feed :D
good flow seems more like battle lines then a song :D
u've had a lot of great rhymes lately :thumbsup:
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