Boulevard of Broken Dream's

[Inzanity]

(Verse 1)
u gotta get ur inner hatred cruicified, be urself cuz' immation is suicide
so much pain within ur soul just die's, this wasn't ur perception of life
ur left in this transcendent demise, searching for dat preestablished harmony
dat u were born wit but lost in time, so u built up an emotional armory
around ur soul, wit suicidal thought's in mind, ur full of envy and ignorence,
but envy is ignorent, in a society full of contemporaries,
u become contempt to burry ur past in an emotional cementary,
ur filled wit integrity, I know life is hard but let it be
ur soul has absolved the pain and now has a consistency, of letting
tear's pour out, as u wonder is God resisting me,
or does He hear ur shout's, to the redeemer,
as the pain become's deeper in life's conformity of torture,
back in ur perpetual youth before life deemed u torured,
it seemed dat luv wud be 4ever in u but now it seem's hate is ur destiny,
is this how ur life was meant to be no to be great is wat was meant 4 me,
but "to be great is to be misunderstood" just like Emerson said,
if u live by dat quote, ur memory will never be dead
just look at all the greats from Christ to Newton, cuz' the proof is in them
so wen da enemy starts fighting u then,
don't be afriad just fight back and remember,
the truth is with in

(Chorus 2x)
I've been walking down this boulevard of broken dreams
with pain reflecting off my past for so long I've lost all hope it seems


(Verse 2)
stranded on the avenue of broken hope
lost in Hell with a frozen soul
life is a mirror that reflect's the past,
pain is a test that only the best will pass
scares so deep my soul's wounded
my heart just bleed's my souls brusing
as I fall with tearless cries
trying to fight the fear inside
drowning in an ocean of misery
from a broken past frozen in history
screaming to God hoping for victory,
yet lost in the shadow's of Hell
with a repobated mind
fighting my adversary
as the demon's laugh slow and yell
this life has left hatred inside
for so long it's had me burried
in an emotional cementary
with lost soul written on my tombstone
walking down a hopeless road and it's scary
with lost hope written on my doomed soul cuz'

(Chorus 2x)

(Verse 3)
I'm a hopeless angel, with a broken halo
trapped in a fearfull love, as I cry tears of blood
in my search for God all I find is a kingless throne
as the pain just grows in this painfull soul
I'm trapped in a casket of misery
my inner demon's laugh as they hiss at me
soon I'll be left to meet the coroner
like Pac with death around the corner
cuz' my every step brings me closer
to the fate of an early death
my broken past has sentenced me to death row
as they find me hanging dead yo with my neck broke
falling into the pit's of Hell with a dead soul
Imagine being 5 year's old and raped
walking with a lifeless soul in hate
my night's are cold with pain
and I think I might just go insane
cuz' I'm frightfull, cold, and crazed
with a frightfull soul enraged
cuz' my lifeless soul's in pain
and

[sinemm]

whoaa great job..great lines and deep alot..liked it aloott..!!!!!
propz for it ep

[JMG]

horrible

[Inzanity]

horrible

?? really?? well don't just tell me it's horrible let me know wat I could have done better, wat I should have changed, u can't just say it's horrible without giving me advice on wat to do better I mean come on if ur gonna critisize it then give me constructive critsizisim.

[$0 R3@L]

horrible

thats not a response thats a joke.If you really thought it was horrible you would be able to suggest why it is so.

the main problem i see is the fact alot of the lines dont rhyme.In some places it rhymes but in others it dont.The hook is your strongest point i feel.

my only question is when we gonna hear a audio from ya?

[Inzanity]

horrible

thats not a response thats a joke.If you really thought it was horrible you would be able to suggest why it is so.

the main problem i see is the fact alot of the lines dont rhyme.In some places it rhymes but in others it dont.The hook is your strongest point i feel.

my only question is when we gonna hear a audio from ya?

when I read it every line rhyme's mabey it's the way ur pronounceing the word's some people pronounce certain words different but anyway as for recording I already have the first verse of this song recorded I'll probably record the chours and last 2 verses this weekend. I'll post it up when it's done. So this will be the first audio every1 hear's from me.

[Kez]

The problem with text is that you can't make it rhyme like you can in audio.

Do audio, then people will see that it rhymes. Otherwise, it'll come off different for different people.

[Inzanity]

The problem with text is that you can't make it rhyme like you can in audio.

Do audio, then people will see that it rhymes. Otherwise, it'll come off different for different people.

yea I see wat ur saying