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my story thus far

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my story thus far

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 15th, '07, 02:57

I Run On they Done, Gone All Behind my Shoulders fuck with Mine it's Over
Play a Part Play Together I Stay Dark and Slay Forever
u'll see a Great Flash feel a Grave Crash
this Fate will Clash it's too Late to Ask
there is no Prevention I hate being Questioned
I go against Convention Like an Extension to be Mentioned
rain matrix is in Contension this is my Dimension
Impact like your already on the Mat
hang yorself with a bud Inlay Rope u can't stay Stay Dope
Lay Low I Create Ghosts don't get shenked by a Stray Post
You couldn't Handle Beef If you Reincarnated into a Bull
my Hammer has a Scheme u have just Participated with ya Skull

I'll Tell u in Advance
don't Dwell on yur Chance
I'll send yur Plans 2 Hell
I can make Demands as Well
(X2)

I'm Bizzack Back 2 Bizz With Facts I make Rap my Bitch
no 1 This Exact u just Act It Sit Class yor Slacking
so just Wish That my Attack Miss but It's Intact so Relax Kid
Make Way or Stay Fake no Mistake Play I Relay 2 break u down like acid
Minds and Thoughts u Ought 2 Find Time is Forgot u Opt 4 Designs
Ryme on Top yur Behind Distraught Caught by Mine
I Lead Text Away Read This 2day so ya Flow can b Schooled
Concede 2 tha Test or Stay Needless 2 Say u won't Pull Thru
yur Ink Confused u can't Think Abused by Strong Shots
a Shrink will b Amused like that if u Blink yur Excused from tha Onslaught
I'm a Problem Solver u should retreat not Gamble u are Null like u Dried a Bag Up
tha Drop In Evolver beef you can't Handle if you were a Bull with Viagra

I'll Tell u in Advance
don't Dwell on yur Chance
I'll send yur Plans 2 Hell
I can make Demands as Well
(X2)

your easy to read like a Banner Cop or Scanner Talk
when my Hammer Drops your fucking Standards Stop
Blazing Guns Mention This tension shit we Fought I'm bored Attention Kids
the Amazing Ones Dimension will put a Dot on More than your Sentences
see I Supply like a Runner I got Pride like an up and Comer
we Ride like Brothers we get High with each Other
I'll be Tried like a Gunner but still Tied like a Hunter
so start start Diving for Cover say Goodbye to your Lover
if you Survive your a Number your Alive but that's Dumber
I'm not down for life I'm down to I Die Motherfucker
Leave one Hyper Extended on a Death List then Chestless and Breathless
I said I'm a Lifer I Ment It so Test This I'm Restless and Obsessive
your too Unprepared that means my Intent Above, Better
I see you Run Scared from what you can't make Sense Of, Ever

I'll Tell u in Advance
don't Dwell on yur Chance
I'll send yur Plans 2 Hell
I can make Demands as Well
(X2)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 20:16

sorry for taking time i wanted to wait till i read it properly :sweating:

its pretty dam good the verses seem to flow well and has great rythming :worship: its a waste not to see this stuff audio'd :'(
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 15th, '07, 20:26

It will happen sooner than later mark my words i need 2 set up tha recording software if I knew where 2 find it
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Postby C-Game » Jan 15th, '07, 21:05

tell u da truth i only read da first verse
defintily gonna read da rest

and man i think u shld do audios for real

coz u got some crazy shit goin

back since da day u started with NO structured straight dissing ppl and now to da meaning ful kool ass shit dropper ,, u have stepped up a lot ... i mean a lot

love to hear da audio
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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Jan 16th, '07, 21:40

cgame wrote:tell u da truth i only read da first verse
defintily gonna read da rest

and man i think u shld do audios for real

coz u got some crazy shit goin

back since da day u started with NO structured straight dissing ppl and now to da meaning ful kool ass shit dropper ,, u have stepped up a lot ... i mean a lot

love to hear da audio


defenatly gotta agree wit that^^ your stuff is really good, keep em' coming :D
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