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Ode to my "Friends"

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Ode to my "Friends"

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 19th, '07, 04:11

[Intro]
Yeah...I know I may act stupid...and sound stupid...but I ain't. It's to entertain y'all, and you leave when someone else comes along.

[Verse 1]
Iight now I know that you say I'm funny
But you're always hittin me up for money
You say I'm an awesome friend
But you're never there 'til the end
We's always hangin out and we can talk for hours
But only 'til someone better comes and you leave with them, coward
I know we had some fun
But now I'm fed up, I'm done.

[Chorus]
Man I'm just the comic relief ain't I?
I'm just there 'til everyone else is ain't I?
I keep you entertained 'til your "real" friends come don't I?
You say you like hangin out don't you?
Fuck that, you don't even know me. "Who?"
Me.

[Verse 2]
Okay so now you think I'm done? I've said it all.
Wrong again man I still have the ball
We never talk on the phone
You say your never home
We never talk online
When I try you put me in a line
I don't even know where you live
But I've given you all I can give
So if you can't accept me now
Fuck you, you better learn how

[Chorus 2x]

[Outro]
There I said it. We don't do shit, we never talk, we never hang, we never do shit. I don't even know why we friends. Damn...


Feed please.
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Postby TiFFany08 » Jan 19th, '07, 04:15

i thought it was good

i actually had a friend like that well not that bad but if someone would come over she'll ignore me but i can't stand her anymore she is annoying
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 19th, '07, 04:25

TiFFany08 wrote:i thought it was good

i actually had a friend like that well not that bad but if someone would come over she'll ignore me but i can't stand her anymore she is annoying


Yeah that's how all my friends are. Appreciate the feed.
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