something before i sleep..

[Flamez]

using mystique creative skillful techniques
dropping dopematic sick rhymez every week
flamin' hot winning streak with answers oblique
so to speak unique ain't weak strong physique
slick writing half asleep all alone without a clique
insane crazy freak asking for rhyming critique
instinctive thoughts leak out turbulent flowz
compose rap expose decompose my weak foes
in attack mode lyrically impressive everything goes
only my interpose but now i myself must transpose

feedback appreciated...

[sinemm]

aw thats cool sounds good n good flow rly also fine rhymes i guess

[Flamez]

thanx for the feedback sinemm...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

really nice flow.....keep it up bro

[Flamez]

thanx bro...


anymore...

[Kez]

You got a real good flow.

[Flamez]

^^ thanx man..



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