I Love You So Much It Hurts

[Inzanity]

I remember the first time we met at the skating rink around ten o'clock at night// It was love at first site// If I would've only known wat was gonna happen I would've walked away instead of putting up a fight// but how was I to know wat the future would hold// how was I to know that one persons heart could've been so cold// my friends warned me that u were on a cold hearted mission// but I didn't listen// u said u loved me and thats all that I believed// how was I to know I was to be decieved// I always thought me and u would last forever// but instead u left me here to put the pieces of the puzzle back together// I must admit that when it comes to playing games wit someones heart u sure are clever// but after all the pain that I've endoured// ur still the one that I adore// I remember all the times u were on the run and I would stay up all night waiting by the phone// Praying that u would come home// and all the times that u cheated// u never gave me the love that I needed// God only knows how many sleepless nights I've cried// because u were out fucking ur bitch on the side// everytime I thought it got better it only got worse// I hate u so much I can't can't possibly put it into words// but at the same time I love u so much it hurts//

[Tomega]

Heavy impression, great for a dope song! Props!
But u use often long sentences and after that a short sentence. That wont fit on a beat, so keep your sentences the same lenght. just a tip
Nice rhyming

[V-DogDaMenace]

yo, u have a funny signature

[Sunni]

Nice one Empty.