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by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 30th, '07, 04:55

I'll Trace my Roots, a Waste of a Move, I just Wait for tha News
in Case my Youth, makes Haste 2, nothing takes tha Place of tha Truth
why Go and Distort if my Flow falls Short, another Closed Door
Nothing Less I'm Just In Regret of Something I should Forget, No More
I'm Invisible, Divisible, tha Abyss isn't Full I'm Miserable, cuz I Feel like a Ghost
Sands Gone, I have nothing 2 Stand On, I'm Real Close but I Don't Appeal 2 Most
Word 2 this Letter, I Deserve Better, but I'm not Worth tha Measure
It's still Work and Pleasure, I'll Hurt Forever, leave my Verses Severed
I wanted 2 Sample tha Throne, my Examples Alone Trampled Bones
I'm a Handfull of Knowns, I Gambled at Home, but I Handled my Own

by 4D » Jan 30th, '07, 09:54

REally liked that one man, top notch. Still doing the extra syllable things, but still great stuff!

by **Global** » Jan 30th, '07, 10:19

FORDIE wrote::8)

REally liked that one man, top notch. Still doing the extra syllable things, but still great stuff!

What He Said Top Notch

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 30th, '07, 18:58

I didn't expect that thanx fo tha feed does this mean not everybody hates me

FD that clef pallete pic still isn't cool

by **Marth** » Jan 30th, '07, 19:35

nice work rain, really nice, good punches (rhymes can bettter, 2 worded )

by **C-Game** » Jan 30th, '07, 19:55

yo rain i read ur shit i really felt it
as i said before u got some ill lyrical talent
nice work man

by **sinemm** » Jan 30th, '07, 20:40

wow thats rly nice sounds rly cool also deep..
dunno if i read ur stuff before but thasts rly cool
good job

by **MoBrat** » Jan 30th, '07, 20:45

ya man sick shit i liked it, it had nice flow :thumbsup:

by 4D » Jan 30th, '07, 22:23

Rain Matrix wrote:I didn't expect that thanx fo tha feed does this mean not everybody hates me

FD that clef pallete pic still isn't cool

I removed that pic man, I agree that wasn't funny. And I don't think anybody hates you, people have been overcritical because you keep praising your rhymes and saying nobody else can do what you do.

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 30th, '07, 23:10

Thanx fo all tha feed I'm in a weird place right now but that should give me something 2 write about

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 31st, '07, 10:21

youre doing good, maybe we'll meet sometime on here but for now im a ghost, naw actually im in afghanistan bitches! catch ya later!

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