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My son

Postby Golden » Feb 4th, '07, 03:16

The way you looked made me feel blind.
The way your heart sounded made me loose my mind
The way i felt about you made me cross lines
Your skin felt so soft, untouched, my hearts unrefined
You are what mankind is to the world, you are to me what air is to the sea
You see, Never again will i look into your eyes, hear my sighs, quit with `em lies
The sky`s the limitt,ive lost my life, never again will i feel pride
I can try to hide, my feeling well hidden, but thruth is I wil never be forgiven
But Im not about to give in.my feelings can`t bee explained,oh the pain
Feigned sympathy, this thing just ain`t for me.
Ive lost the one thing i would ever care about, im fading out

feedback:)
Yeah...keep,keep it real
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Postby Restlesswon » Feb 4th, '07, 05:31

thats deep
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Postby C-Game » Feb 4th, '07, 07:34

not gonna say anythin other than it was touchin and i know u meant it ...
nice stuff bro
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Postby Cory Matthews » Feb 4th, '07, 08:02

r u comfertable with ur sexuality
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Postby Golden » Feb 4th, '07, 12:50

Cory Matthews wrote:r u comfertable with ur sexuality


meaning?
Yeah...keep,keep it real
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Postby sinemm » Feb 4th, '07, 16:23

C-Game wrote:not gonna say anythin other than it was touchin and i know u meant it ...
nice stuff bro
LIFE WOULD BE A MISTAKE WITHOUT MUSIC!!
Friedrich Nietzsche
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Postby Golden » Feb 4th, '07, 23:58

Thanks everybody :happy:
Yeah...keep,keep it real
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