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freestyle ( gona be in a song)

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freestyle ( gona be in a song)

Postby Imposter » Feb 5th, '07, 05:12

i hate when people talk shit about me when they dont no shit/
it triggers something up inside of me in minutes i become explosive/
some sort of feeling comes under me like some sort of hypnosis/
its been brought on to me such as a diagnosis/
all cuz someone said shit when they dont no shit/
people like that deserve to get their throat slit/
and their fucking bones split/
hopefully they were full of hope but now their hopeless/
full of jokes but now jokeless/
thats my trick so fukin hocus pokus/
im no magician i just know shit/ so ill drop my drawers for anyone who disrespects can blow this/
but then you bitchez will disrespect just to do it/
so ill grab ur mom and force you to screw it ( do it now)/
wut ever your thinkin about me i can see through it/
so theres no need for u bitchez to talk about me but you still do it/
cuz thats all you can do is talk your afraid to put some action into it/
and im not the kinda guy that tries to start trouble/
but if im a have to then your all in some big trouble/
i have ppl and i no ppl who aint scared to kill nobody/
all it takes is 100 and bang bye bye there goes somebody/
and RIP aint just our name/
its wut we do to muther fukers so play it safe im gone u bitchez better do the same/
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 5th, '07, 14:05

how can it be a freestyle :confusion: you got onde of those coms were you say it and the com types it up :unsure:

and maybe if you structure it right people will read it :sweating:
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Postby Flamez » Feb 5th, '07, 15:54

yea structure it right so it could be easier to follow and read what you wrote.. :sweating:
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