My Verbal Beating

[MoBrat]

Takin down cause no 1 really cares what i have 2 say lol

[Flamez]

ummm....lines are too long to keep a steady flow...and you need to structure this better so ppl can follow what you wrote...i didn't read it all cuz the structure of this is just messed up lol

[MoBrat]

lol ya it doesn't look proper in here i was doing a pyrmid type of effect with the lyrics in my msn myspace so it looks really messed up but that only seems 2 happen in TR i've posted it else where and it looks fine