tribute

[DjSnax]

couple months back...

This is a tribute to every last boy and girl
even the ones
that are brand new to this beautiful loving world

this is a tribute to all the caring dads
who raises you
the very same one I never got to have

this is a tribute to all the loving mothers
always be there for you
mine didn't want me, she sent me to another


from day one to ground zero
had to be my own hero
stealing a loaf of bread to get by
no sorry
I really wish that it was a lie
today my life is okay, just fine
I lived in hell, once upon a time

But before I met TJ and Jainie
my days had been depressive and rainy
my life had never once been like this
had a home, a place to live, but before...
sorry, kinda hurts to reminisce
sometimes, I wish I didn't exist

all the times I had to steal
just so I could have a meal
or do some stuff I'd regret later
God help these memories grow fader

this is a tribute to every happy family
so
you will never have to end up a person like me
so
you won't have to starve and beg on a filthy street

my parents didn't raise me
hell, they didn't even know me
everything I know
TJ had to help and show me
and when it comes to my passionate side
that was Jainie
so in a small essance Janie made me
that makes her my real mother
forget about the other

I really wish things would stay this way
thats all gone now
TJ's no longer with us today
here one second gone the next
took four, five shots to the chest
never forget
on 16th street and northwest
May 1st, he was put to rest
I'll never forgive
I'll never forget

this is a tribute to every happy family
so
you will never have to end up a person like me
so
you won't have cry yourself to sleep
all alone
in the middle of a fifthy street




got a bunch better since i wrote this, was when i first started... and i was kinda listenin to 'rock bottom' when I wrote this up

[Golden]

It`s great. I like it

[JMG]

how the hell does someone manged to cut down my rhymes and call them basic and shit like this dont get critasized u fuckers are dumb ass hell that shit sucked

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

how the hell does someone manged to cut down my rhymes and call them basic and shit like this dont get critasized u fuckers are dumb ass hell that shit sucked

arsehole

[DjSnax]

hell im fine with criticism dont bother me at all, it was just something basic that took me less than an hour to come up with, and I wrote this about a year ago anyway so it was when I was first starting to write. The part about "your" rhymes Jmgeezy I don't know what you're talking about, I've been here about a day now and read nothing by you.