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I Get It

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I Get It

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 9th, '07, 03:36

Quick Fists, Diss Scripts, This Is my Sickness, watch as I Depict It
these Events lead 2 Consequence, Hence tha Sense that u've been Evicted

I turn my Pages 2 Ash, I'm no Stage Act, when I'm Paid I'l Relax
in tha Past I've Had tha Fast Cash, so now they want 2 Raid my Pad

it's Magic, I make my Mathmatics do Acrobatics so get yur Stats Fixed Thats It
Tragic Madness, mapped like an atlas I Stay At This technical like tha Baddest Gadget

dre can make my Head Ring, Instead it Stings, time 4 me 2 Spread my Wings
I know what Cred Brings, thats why we do tha Net Thing, we're like Misled Kings

Trim it down 2 Size, we Swim in Lies, people thinking Sins Wise, it's Deceitfull
gotta play Hard Man, yur Bars Understand, if yur far from a Plan, isn't it Neat Tho
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Postby Flamez » Feb 9th, '07, 06:22

nice was good...
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Postby Global » Feb 9th, '07, 06:27

Nice man .It gave me a upper coz i was bored :flower:
“Some people tell me that we professional players are soccer slaves. Well, if this is slavery, give me a life sentence.” - Bobby Charlton

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Postby DjSnax » Feb 9th, '07, 22:15

like that its more fast paced with the ryhmes
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