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help on a poem please.

Postby tiffany » Feb 16th, '07, 17:04

I need some one that can do a poem 4 me . it's 4 my boyfriend i want 2 give him a poem for our 1 year anniversary.. im not good at doing poems and i need some one hlp.
if you want to message me please . thanks. :sweating: :(
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Postby C-Game » Feb 16th, '07, 21:00

i cld hv done a poem if u were a boy and u were writin it to ur girl friend..
u shld ask sinemm or EmptyPromises
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Postby sinemm » Feb 17th, '07, 18:01

well a friend of mine asked me to writ a love letter to her boyfriend for the valentines day

though i didnt want to..i wrote..it was really great :8) cant be modest bout it but :p it was in my own language and im good at writin in my own language but in english thats not that easy

plus

you dont have to write a poem or find some1 to write you a poem cuz that wont mean so much to him when some1 else than you write it..

try to write by yourself..it doesnt gotta be a poem as i said you can write a letter

which tells just the only feelings you got for him.. :) let it be innocent and honest.. ;) just tell those stuff in it..im sure it will be enough..at least thats sth YOU wrote.. ;)

and plus we dont know you and your bf..we dont know what you two had lived etc..you shud do it by your own..

just feel it..and let it go..put it on the paper..it will be nice ;) :flower:
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Postby tiffany » Feb 18th, '07, 15:49

ur guys/ladies are right.
It's just i cant write a peom or a letter.
My dad get do it either. :(
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Postby LISA » Feb 24th, '07, 22:17

go to the local library and just cone, theres a ton of realy great poets out there in the library. just dont pick poe or dickenson, there downers, pick shelly or a romantic.then you can change a word or two make it close to youre own.
im just interested in eminem hes hot but im no groopy,i loved 8mile though!
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Postby tiffany » Mar 2nd, '07, 17:44

were i live the libary really old don't know if the'll have peom there but i'll look. . i was thinking of doing that thanks.
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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 2nd, '07, 20:16

I'm Composed of an Inner Struggle
I Chose 2 do tha Winners Hustle
4 Those Beginners in Trouble
thats how it Goes Skin Yur Knuckles
events Show Grim Words but Subtle
notice them or u'll Close [Inwards] 2 Rubble
unless u Managed 2 kill yur Past
if not tha Damage Will Last

[Inwards- In Words] I'm using wordplay in poetry now fucking battles lol
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