something i wrote..

by **Flamez** » Feb 22nd, '07, 05:24

erupting out with viciously furious vengeance using venomous deadly force
you gonna remorse you faced me i'm a champion at heart a cavalry horse
reinforcing myself bouncing back exploding rocket propelled grenades
Jack of all trades ace of spades rippin' ya apart with sharp razor blades
without touching anything transmittin' std aids ain't playing charades
surprise attackin' air raids i'm like N.W.A. straight outta cali-for-ni-a
except from the city of L.A. where black mamba and them lakers play
strike so quick once i slay you start to decay king jose my rules you'll obey
fading away my bad character starting from scratch all over once again
gain back respect, higher reputation, strength, and skills call me master zen

feedback appreciated

by **Global** » Feb 22nd, '07, 08:49

Flamez wrote:erupting out with viciously furious vengeance using venomous deadly force
you gonna remorse you faced me i'm a champion at heart a cavalry horse
reinforcing myself bouncing back exploding rocket propelled grenades
Jack of all trades ace of spades rippin' ya apart with sharp razor blades
without touching anything transmittin' std aids ain't playing charades
surprise attackin' air raids i'm like N.W.A. straight outta cali-for-ni-a
except from the city of L.A. where black mamba and them lakers play
strike so quick once i slay you start to decay king jose my rules you'll obey
fading away my bad character starting from scratch all over once again
gain back respect, higher reputation, strength, and skills call me master zen

feedback appreciated

thats tight man

but you still cant beat me in rap battles :smoking: