some real shit

[JMG]

im fianlly covinced i need to lift this shit
and not quit like a bitch gettin to my head thoughts of foldin
but flowin in my head wont stop flowin
its not goin its growin i cant control them
my soul is promoted to show them expose this
prove my self move my welth to sooth my belt
to just fit my waist and not quit this race to much at stake
to get to pace my legs just gotta take it for all it is
cuz i call this shit uncontroable flawless shit toped with a verble lift
in my journal bitch the rhymes just keep fallin
even when my mind is stallin i pull out the hardest arist in me
nothin in my wallet still come up with a g to just free
my incredably flow steppin it up even though its not needed
im still speakin this genius leavin people speachless
teachin teachers frequent the hatin is meanin less
im deep in this shit so steep i cant be beaten
even when im sleepin im dreamin about a verse
not just an out of this earth but the universe to the sky to the dirt
im hurtin these worthless jerks who dont reconize my words
over look them but truly a bolder shook them
no forfitin even if im in the worst condition
im still spittin this friction nothin can come close when raisin
my hopes and vision are spoken and writtin
never broken or spitined broke for a livin
so im hopin im gettin a grasp of these flows
soaked with my soul heart and mind
its dark or ur blind not to feel my spark and rhymes
drowin against a shark in a tide unrevised
but the fearless part in my lines come out
and take the show like i owned the whole competision
stop and lisin to my powerfull sentences
a out of school menece that glowers on the benches
waitin for my shot takin alot of heat
sayin im not gonna beat no one
but when my flows done ull see theres no flaws
a long pause and a strong applause
shooked and apaued the place is amazed
i never thought id gaze the day
of muther fuckers screamin my name
steamin flames coated in my rhymes
like they were spokin in signs there untouchable
they cant be budged or pulled nudge or fooled
i give cautions that i cant be outsmarted or bitten
if i start it i finish till the day i leave in a stretcher
i raise the heat and break the tempature barrier
a outstandin flow character just shows in my carrier

[Inches]

structure it an ill read

[Flamez]

dude structure this so its easier to read...

[JMG]

alright its better now

[JMG]

uppin for feed

[Enimee]

three letters



L O L


good try it wasnt half bad actually keep it up kid