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New V-Dog Shiznit, SHITS HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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New V-Dog Shiznit, SHITS HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 21st, '05, 02:52

These POTENT SENTENCES SLAY THE BEST, I COMPOSE THE SICKEST WHEN MAKIN' TEXT, THE MOTIVED MISSION OF STATED DEATH, will "knock you into check" like JAHOVA WITNESSES PLAYIN' CHESS!!!
I'll ASSAULT YA CUZ YOUR CLAN'S ALL WEAK, The 'red' got this pussy uncomfortable, like when there's a FAULT AND THEN THE TAMPON LEAKS, cuz all ya have is personals that are FALSER THAN YOUR GRANDPA'S TEETH!!!
I kill with the writtens, people like HE'S TEXTIN FATAL, But nigga's is a pro at riding, yeah, THE BESTS THE STABLE," We know you're not "dope," but i'll still give "P TESTS," I'M ABLE, to leave him in "a box" like 'Halo,' and really make "D.S." AN ANGEL!(D.S.- Diez)
Step outta line and i'll SET YA STRAIGHT WITH THIS PERFECT SPITTIN,' So keep it up and turn this into a DEADLY DAY, IT IS SURE PRECISION, cuz you wish you had these 'sweet bars,' but can't touch em' like HEAVYWEIGHTS ON THE PERKIS SYSTEM!!!
Make cats levitate-when-I-spur-with-writtens, He'll be CAPSIZED WHEN THIS DUDE FALLS, CHASTISE HIM AND BRUISE SKULLS, And on the mic, you couldn't move a crowd if you SPAT LIVE IN A U-HAUL!!!
V-Dog's a true monarch who conquers THROUGH MISSIONS, GENGHIS? PLEASE, Witness V spit and YOU WITNESS GREATNESS SEE, ur boy on the other hand, this DUDE'S WRITTEN GAME IS WEAK! No wonder we're not 'feeling Soljah,' we just like the TUITION PAYED FOR FREE!!!
Don't trip when the FIST IS AIMED AT YOUR WHIG, You'll get 'nun,' and I don't mean a SISTER PRAYING YOU BITCH, I see that you're wack, so I'll have this "pussy beat off the Bat," like Catwoman feeling frisky with MISTER WAYNE IN THE CRIB!!! It's OVER!

damn, im in a rush, and im tired, so it wasnt REALLY hot
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Postby Sunni » Sep 22nd, '05, 08:49

It's pretty cool.
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Postby B.A.D. » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:49

what inspired you?
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