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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 1st, '07, 22:53

sometimes i wake upon the night and scream
i look back to the past to see the present is a lifeless dream
gun fights will fenes gotta sleep with one eye open
grib the 9 ready to die for my potion
make em see shells hear the ocean
some say these hopes are my severe hopeless notion
but im focued to get the tokens since the block converted to smokin
topangas forced to get a job hurt an broken
I hate that I gotta make her but theres alot at stake here
i die inside when u cry and i gotta see those angels tears
faithfull years that we spent togther could never see us apart
but my bleedin heart says i dont deserve this masterpiece
sometimes girl i feel like i have to flee
is god challengin us with these catastrophes
jesus i ask u please dont let us see another tradegy
fast to my knees vast in fee's tryin to re up on k's
feed these starvin drasitc fenes only to charge my baterie

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what must i do how do i stop this struggle
please lord help
feelin to deep at bein a g but they cant knock my hustle
please lord help
i feel ashamed when i breath this air
please lord help
heal this pain alls i got is this ring i wear
please lord help
topanga what ever happens ill be true
please lord help
forever me and u

verse 2

when it comes to dealin this freebased yay
im honestly the best in this game im ashamed to say
but dont ever honer me for sellin crack
im dwellin back i owe my family a apology for what ive become
im just a bum a 2nd rate citinzan this world im livin in
is drivin in the wrong direction gettin kids to pinch a squid
this ingorant shit we live within ive been in it time to change
been though 2 much pain gotta walk away from this evil game
mr feeny uve taught me so much but i can do is flip this cake
into a quarter fix this weight on my shoulders 8 balls and kilo's
mistakes fallin into free loads there sceamin for my dismise
will i survive if i die will i get my wings and finally get to fly
when im not alive hooked to the iv will i reach the sky
or burn for interity god forgive me for all my sins
let me long live within my ins an outs just please let make it out

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verse 3

im tired of movin these gram an k's
turn my life around start a family
dont wanna face this harsh relity
kids starvin fatalitys in every county
i spark up this blunt dont start to front
the coffens are mulitplayin folks are dyin
while im movin o's and rhymin just to past the time
grasp this 9, 22 tasks crimes clips trappin mines
blastin ties all to add up to a laughin god
like were puttin on a show for his entertainment
been in pain locked behind bars waitin for an aringment
but i stand behind my bars as i wait o so patient
behind these scars ancshous for a better livin arrangment
ancshous for this misery to be acient history


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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 1st, '07, 22:56

Please Lord Help


please do :shifty: j/p
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 1st, '07, 23:19

its hard out here in the hood
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 2nd, '07, 00:00

so what like a bar a day ?
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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 2nd, '07, 00:33

I wrote my new song in less then half a night dam.., CM u gotta keep that tapanga punchine on tha lo lo
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 2nd, '07, 00:35

what do u mean?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 2nd, '07, 00:42

McMaybe wrote:
Cory Matthews wrote:so what like a bar a day ?



no, but dont rush perfection, take your time, read it over and over again untill the flow ad structure are perfect, a true emcee can rap the same song on an y beat, master the structure, and you'll have perfect flow


i write everyhting as it comee like feestyle writing, then go back over it till i get the lyrical content i want the right flow ect.. then spit it like 20 tmes over the beat...then go back n touch it up again, then spit it about 10 times, then if after that im happy i record...again ive only use this technique on my EP the other stuff i dont have the inspiration to do it...im guessing its the beats :sweating:
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Postby C-Game » Mar 2nd, '07, 21:07

i normally use ma fone wen im out or in da bus or travellin alone...
and type wat ever shit that comes to ma head and combine it...

and CORY .... who are u ???
i mean r Jmgeezys brother or r u him....
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 3rd, '07, 22:51

im cory matthews i am the streets
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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 4th, '07, 06:41

Cm is Deciet, no Heat, he wanted Beef, now he's in Retreat, I Slam Foes
I Delete his Weak put me 2 Sleep Speak, known in tha Streets as "Manhole"
"C Mat" is what u will do when Comparing Raps A Fact, I'm Above Kids Dry Scripts
Free Attacks, Leave u Last, I Keyed 2 Fast he's Staring At Tha Back Of His Eyelids
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