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The Lost Child (it's not finished yet)

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The Lost Child (it's not finished yet)

Postby Inzanity » Mar 7th, '07, 19:26

Verse 1)
Here's the story of a child that's lost walking alone in the world wit her soul at cost
all she has is her dream's and a deep hurt she can't sleep at night cuz' dey beat her
it all began at the age of five she walked into the room her uncle was right there
with hate inside he became her nightmare the detail's of wat he did I won't say
all I'll tell u is she got raped it soon became a daily thing just a part of her life
he did it in the mourning and in the dark of the night for 6 year's her little heart was in fright
her freshmen year of high school her daddy had his turn at her
her mommy didn't believe her the girl's soul was burned shaddered
wit her mom saying thing's like "u can't tell any1 cuz' dat's embarssing
and it's ur fault it happened ur an embarssment so just forget wat had happened
don't talk about wat ur uncle and dad did" so she tried to earse the memorie's
but the hate would never leave 15 year's old trying to figure out
why she's at her wrist wit a knife ready to do something
that would mean risking her life while at the same time getting rid of the fright

(Chours)
There ain't nothing sadder then a child taking there life
cuz their soul is breaking inside remenessing on the
day's that she cried from the pain that's inside
(repeat 1x)

(Verse 2)
let me take u back a few year's in time b4 all the fear inside and the tear's she cried
she somehow found her way through the weary time's,
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Postby Flamez » Mar 8th, '07, 01:56

its good i like it man
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Postby sinemm » Mar 9th, '07, 21:02

thats deep thats real thats

n nice..good job hun
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