ryme help / feed this

[Rain Matrix]

u say I'm way off, why think twice, it's not simple rymes, prepare yorself
do play lines stay soft, I ink advice, this drop wrinkles time, repair poor health

elevation non stop, others type is weak involve a middle e-guy
tell tha nation onslaught, another crisis seeks kin solve tha riddle, reply

it seems fun granted, thats how I do, party proud, fight tha miracle english
with dreams come chances, rap now lie 2 rd's crowd like a lyrical linguist

flow wild, crazy, might diss, confused yet, u oughta be, bitch, I perplex ya fully bastard
no style lately read like this, abused threats, dude gotcha agree, it's lifer text, tha multi master

[Kojack]

it's nice, you don't need rhymes to create a song,
cosenstrate your self to the sense, not to the rhyme
rhyme is the last hole of the belt

[Rain Matrix]

I make songs interesting, and u couldn't battle me if I had a taco bell and u had 3000 starving mexican children, no 1 but me rymes like this case point closed...

so did any1 like it

[D@vid]

its not bad, but def not one of ur best. doesn't flow that well to me at least


and kojack is just stupid. not everything is written to be a song, maybe he just wrote this for practice or whatever u dumbfuck

[Rain Matrix]

This is pretty much me just abusing my right 2 multi, tha flow might of been off but tha message was there