Dreams Keystyle

[Infliction]

Wrote this to the Dreams instrumental, might make it into a full song
Feedback please

ayyo...what we got in this cold life if we aint got dreams?
Ten thousand people screamin my name, crazier than anythin that you've ever seen
24 inch rims shinin' bright and clean, boss grill on the caddy shit you kno thass mean
Get my message round the world, shout it out to boys and girls,
Kids in bed cryin while they lie back, and recite a known infliction track
The flow that stops you in ya tracks like a 90 year old wit a heartattack
The style that make you holla back, but at the same time make a kid turn down crack
And keep a young man from givin his wife a smack
The dream of makin it big with nothin but a pencil and a pad
Writin down the voice inside, when hes sad or when hes mad, when hes good or when hes bad
Its kinda funny tho cuz sometimes I feel like im Christ