The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Burnin weed for all of Internity

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Burnin weed for all of Internity

Postby JMG » Mar 25th, '07, 06:34

when im knee deep in oceans emoticanally
ultimaly smokin weed
was the only dose that could focus me
even if it was unhealty supposely
it helped me and rose me
smoked mostly to blow steam
felt freely and spoke openly
when i was afraid and broke soically
i breathed easy but mostly
no one could see me i was ghostly
wasnt here disapeered in a different relm
cuz real life apeared like a livin hell
before i was worthless now im workin my dream
searchin for the purpose still burnin this weed
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami

Postby JMG » Mar 25th, '07, 06:40

no i dont want u to do n e thing i could careless what u think
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami

Postby JMG » Mar 25th, '07, 06:43

i never denied i said that either even though u spelled my name wrong
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami

Postby JMG » Mar 25th, '07, 06:50

well its easy to take advice from u when ur not sayin im the worst on the board but well give me an example of the uneven rhymes in there
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami

Postby JMG » Mar 25th, '07, 07:01

ight got ya ill work on it
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron