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Crossin Boundries

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Crossin Boundries

Postby JMG » Apr 4th, '07, 00:45

latly ive been actin phycopathic
blastin faggots with macks and semi automatics
takin charge blowin up gay bars today ive stolen 8 cars
me and my villin demon now were killin police men
were chillin never freezin my hands aint goin up
its a officer down in the water drowned
ur daughters got a stalker now
soon she will be no longer around
till she shows up found lookin like a slaughterd cow
im way beyond a crazy guy gettin babys high
im mystical tired of bein miserble so i pissed on rules
i quit with school cuz im convinced its bull
and i kept hearin voices sayin kill the princable
so i beat that fag to death smashed his desk
packed my bags laughed and left
that was my first homacide
now i dramatize by bombin guys
in front of there mamas eyes
got osama ties and tali ban connections
bout to rally a mad man convention
give them badges fake guns and dress them
send them to war thinkin they have protection
watch em die and my plan mastered perfection
and if i get married im gonna have a batterd wife
i hope i have a son so i can sacarfice his faggot life
with a black magic knife bring him back and stab him twice
i never quit fuck traffic lights i drop rhymes
never givin a fuck about stop signs or boundries
im boud to pound g's till im burnin pounds of calories
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Postby Rae » Apr 4th, '07, 03:22

i know Rain Matrix is gonna say im dick ridin u but im not.
i really do like ur stuff.
just like i generally like Steve's stuff and So Reals stuff and some otha ppl.

ur flow is good. ur rhymes are great. and stuff so yeah.
i like it!

keep it up.
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Postby JMG » Apr 4th, '07, 04:55

well thanks and fuck rain he thinks hes neo so his opinion dont mean shit
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