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Postby Big-T » Apr 4th, '07, 19:37

Just some lines, i dont fink theyre bad nor my best work bit too cocky 4 me :sweating: but read n tell me wot u fink Peace

I'm deadly once it's started, Ready? You're the target
My punchlines so sharp you'll envy the departed
I'm heavenly the smartest, heavy when tearing half-wits
Get left dead on a carpet with the rhymes you barely fuck with!
Better than any & every Marksman, my life is overly hard
But I still get u emotionally scarred and hopefully charred
Leave this geek tattered, he getting painfully shattered
Your license to kill compared to mine is dangerously invalid
I'm stinging yo mind and spine wiv my signature rhymes
When you runnin' the streets only shit you killing is time
Youze a liar, bitch, why you trynna spit? You gon die hard n quick
Hop on this giant dick coz I no u pussy when u softer than vagina lips
Clones are people two.
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Postby Rae » Apr 4th, '07, 21:55

i like it.

i think this is the 1st thing i read by ya.

but i like it. nice rhymes.

uh idk about tha flow. (thats prob. just me tho)

keep it up! :D

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Postby Hoopz » Apr 4th, '07, 22:19

I Like it, Nice lyrics, Flows well for me.

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Postby Big-T » Apr 4th, '07, 23:43

cheers 4 the feedback guyz :happy:
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