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Moribund a.k.a near death or Sicilia Game

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Sicilia Game or Moribun A.K.A Near Death

Moribund A.K.A Near Death
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Moribund a.k.a near death or Sicilia Game

Postby Kojack » Apr 5th, '07, 15:52

Moribund A.K.A Near Death

I'm soo quick-and-fast, you take time to suck-dick and you'll get passed
I'll have you harmed-and-spat-in, even when your armed-and-packin and then you'll see this white trash crappin'
and he'll go to his mom rattin' but if you didn't want it you shouldn't have been-askin'
plus you smell like shit with all that gas that you been-passin'
It's a fact i'm sweet-and-sonic and i'll make you bleed-and-vomit, I'm full of greed-and-its-chronic
I'll cut your spleen-cause-I'm-demonic, no one will grieve-cause-they-all-want it.
and you know I'm sick-and-violent, you suck dick-but-you-keep-silent
plus times-run-out-that's-all-thats-them, it's my time-to-shout-and-piss-at-him.

Sicilia Game

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when Real's around

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when Hayzi's around

You know i'm back when the bitches talk shit
I know you don't love, cause i ain't love a bitch

Girl yo pretty nice, let's go for a fuck
you wanna touch my Laborghini chain, and i'm hot
we can go toghether, up in the club
you can bounce your ass, and i can watch
you bouncin' for the Syndicate Team, this ain't a dream
don't excuse your self, just ride on the beat
back in the Crosstown, i can wait for a month
but here in Sicilia, i can't wait to fuck

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when Tr's around

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when Global's around

You know i'm back when the bitches talk shit
I know you don't love, cause i ain't love a bitch

back in '93 thang, girl wassup
now i'm rich, and i make girls, ride
till a kill your gf, i can't belive you bi
cause we got laid 7 times, right
it's me Kojack, the same person
but you can call me C-Prince, cause (brraaat) take that
i'm the new rapper kid, so watch your mouth girl
i'm going to high school, but i'm so careless

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when C.O.A's around

I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me
I know you don't love me when Bar's around

You know i'm back when the bitches talk shit
I know you don't love, cause i ain't love a bitch


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Postby AspirinE » Apr 5th, '07, 15:59

mah little donut-gulping-liquid-fat-drinking-chubbychunky <3, you know I iz gon be voten for you in any case. <3
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 5th, '07, 16:00

AspirinE wrote:mah little donut-gulbing-liquid-fat-drinking-chubbychunky <3, you know I iz gon be voten for you in any case. <3


lol. Explain ur vote :smoking: newayz the cats given by kojack are unfair. It shud be catagorized more
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 5th, '07, 16:11

DJ.Parker wrote:
AspirinE wrote:mah little donut-gulbing-liquid-fat-drinking-chubbychunky <3, you know I iz gon be voten for you in any case. <3


lol. Explain ur vote :smoking: newayz the cats given by kojack are unfair. It shud be catagorized more


the fuck you tawkin bout mayne?

Kojack brought straing fire!!!


check dis:

Girl yo pretty nice, let's go for a fuck
you wanna touch my Laborghini chain, and i'm hot
we can go toghether, up in the club
you can bounce your ass, and i can watch

Multi's man, multis. plus the dude slangin' beta then them southern booiiiiiiz
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Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '07, 17:54

ko jack sucks
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Postby IceAxe » Apr 5th, '07, 18:16

I like how Kojack has the ability to take wack songs and make them worse...
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 5th, '07, 19:07

i bet kojacks the sorta kid who thinks jails good for two reasons.

the ''image'' and for some free anal sex.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 21:34

wasn't there already 200 songs just like this?
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:31

iceaxe187 wrote:I like how Kojack has the ability to take wack songs and make them worse...


Man ice, you just made my day.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:32

emineman wrote:
iceaxe187 wrote:I like how Kojack has the ability to take wack songs and make them worse...


Man ice, you just made my day.


somebody has to. nobody else will.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:34

what the fuck is up with you?

you don't even know me to be sayin' shit like that.
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Postby IceAxe » Apr 5th, '07, 22:34

emineman wrote:
iceaxe187 wrote:I like how Kojack has the ability to take wack songs and make them worse...


Man ice, you just made my day.


I do what I can to help :smoking:
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:36

emineman wrote:what the fuck is up with you?

you don't even know me to be sayin' shit like that.


wut the fuck man, sit down for a sec. take a joke, damn.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:41

sorry just a bit stressed, i have this fuckin' huge ass thing due 2morrow and i ain't even started.
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Postby Kez » Apr 6th, '07, 02:33

God i hate how you and Coccoa post shit

It's always like "DUN SLEEP ON DIS SHIT"

As for the song, haha, Bar, Global, TR etc make your "bitch" not love you anymore? :unsure: That's all i could gather from the lyrics.

You'd do well with Akon. He makes retarded club songs that don't rhyme too.
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