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Postby Tash8 » Apr 8th, '07, 19:20

Killer Instinct, I got an Iller Instinct, while you others suck dick with N'SYNC,
I roll Fresh Things, because I'm the Thresh King, and I'm still Strenthen-Ing

When I flow it's an Automatic Win, and I'm Acrobatic When; my Glocks Have Had It Then;
It's no less than a Deplomatic Sin, it becomes a hot new Situation In, my beefs with Them.

And this becomes my Last Bar, had your ass Blast Far, and you shouldn't have been Messin' with the Ashkar;
Dissin' you Afar, leave you with A Scar, I know the way I roll is Bizarre, hopefully you accept These Bars.

i had to write 3 bars for something so i wrote something quick, what yall think?
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Postby Unscarred » Apr 8th, '07, 19:24

Is very good man :worship: keep doing this way
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“The individual has always had to struggle to keep from being overwhelmed by the tribe. If you try it, you will be lonely often, and sometimes frightened. But no price is too high to pay for the privilege of owning yourself.”
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 8th, '07, 19:37

thanks more feed please.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 03:49

bump
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Postby Tash8 » May 7th, '07, 04:45

a big bujump
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 8th, '07, 21:57

not bad look it's me, no feed 4 me but i do love fig newtons

when it storms it rains duh!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 8th, '07, 22:01

Rain Matrix wrote:not bad look it's me, no feed 4 me but i do love fig newtons

when it storms it rains duh!


in english please ?
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Postby JMG » May 8th, '07, 22:14

sounds to me like he wants some fig newtons but who knows
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 8th, '07, 22:21

american english, my game is there again in this
fuck u cripple boy, yur slower than a terrapins finish

oh man u gotta love a tasty fig newton! :shifty:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 8th, '07, 22:22

Rain Matrix wrote:american english, my game is there again in this
fuck u cripple boy, yur slower than a terrapins finish

oh man u gotta love a tasty fig newton! :shifty:



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