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The Past of Time Forgotten (Full Song)

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The Past of Time Forgotten (Full Song)

Postby Inzanity » Apr 18th, '07, 05:16

(Verse 1)
I'm sitting her remenesing on the past of time forgotten
through the tear's it's hard to laugh the time has caused them
It's hard to let go of yesterday, I've got alot left to say
through the tear's it's hard to look to the future
I'm gonna speak the truth although the truth hurt's
the spring of 2003, the tear's rained inside of me
late night's, no sleep, waiting by the phone
this pain strike's so deep, pacing all alone
that year was filled with open casket's
the tear's spilled from open gashes
deep within my soul, I couldn't keep from getting cold
I'm speaking of a soul that was deepened with no hope
the 4th of July me and you at that South Hadley School
watching the fire work's, the love I felt for u that night made me want to cry at first

(Chours)
These memorie's won't last the time has lost them
and looking back through the past of time forgotten
all I have is the pain that time has broughten
cold night's in the pouring rain as we laugh at are thought's and
the past of time forgotten, and these tear's the time has caused them
it's hard to let go of the past of time forgotten

(Verse 2)
Friday night's at Rock N Rollerskate go outside stop and roll to blaze
getting high just to rid the pain we were just kid's enraged
from the abuse of are past, the bruses that slashed
are soul's in half, and made us cold hearted
with are soul's darkened, it was us against the world
so we fought with fist's of rage cuz' are soul's were rinsed with hate
we were lost in the shadow's of hate, but that's just the cost of rage
the cost we pay, it's the cost of hate, i wish I could be 15 again
cuz' everything was easy then, all I had to worry about was me and Jen
but now although I'm the same the time's have changed,
and I can't go back to the past of time forgotten
and although it's hard to say goodbye to adilesence
this is where time has brough us
so if the pain come's I have to let it

(Chours)

(Verse 3)
Now we're looking at our future, with a baby on the way and no place to live
wat I wouldn't do for a chance to go back to yesterday and be a kid
It hurt's cuz nobody want's to see us 2gether,
ur family hate's me and my family hate's u
they can't except the fact that we're ment to be forever
cuz' just like u saved me, I saved u
they wanna break us up but we've come 2 far to say goodbye
they can't break are love, we're 2 heart's that will survive
It hasn't been easy, and I can't promise u it will be
but u gotta believe me, just the thought of livin' without u kill's me
cuz' if I never needed u b4 I need u now
I'll love u forever more and I promise to keep that vow
we've made it through the past of time forgotten
so I know we'll make it through the future after all look where the time has brought us

(Chours)
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Postby JMG » Apr 18th, '07, 05:26

its good i liked it i dont post full songs on here cuz its hard to have other ppl hear it the way u do in ur head especailly the hook good job though keep it up
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Postby Inzanity » Apr 20th, '07, 03:28

*Bump* anybody else I would like to hear people's opion's on it.
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Postby Flamez » Apr 20th, '07, 06:20

i liked it a lot some really nice stuff there good work :)
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Postby Hadez » Apr 20th, '07, 09:00

very nice :worship: , bravo =D>
i like songs about emotional struggle, i relate to them. propz for this, it was good.
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Postby Inzanity » Apr 21st, '07, 04:13

thanx upping for more reply's
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Postby Global » Apr 21st, '07, 04:16

Thats some tight shit empty :smoking:
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Postby sinemm » Apr 21st, '07, 13:59

good job
not much to say on it
pretty cool :)
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